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Red boat in the harbour,
commercial trawler amidst the blue
like a gunshot-wound
on a cop's patrol shirt
Our office has a view of the sea.
You can see so many things. On the sea.
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:iconmoonlightwillow6:
I really liked this. It made me stop and think for a moment. The metaphor here was incredibly thought provoking. I also loved the bluntness of the piece. It got to the point.

:heart: Absolutely amazing.
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:iconpseudometry:
Thank you very much! Pleased you liked it :)
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saevusWinds Sep 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Huh, intriguing idea, makes one really think about how things are. Its really short, but if you added more, it could lose its beauty. Good job.
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:iconpseudometry:
Why thank you, glad to hear that!
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saevusWinds Sep 18, 2011  Student General Artist
no problem

:)
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AlisonBlue Sep 13, 2011  Student Writer
this should win some sort of simile award --
I may have to invent it.
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:iconpseudometry:
In all seriousness though, I think creating a simile award would be excellent. Similes get a bad rap these days.
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AlisonBlue Sep 13, 2011  Student Writer
it's true, isn't it, and I don't like most
of the ones I come across (yours more
than crossed the finish line, though.)
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:iconpseudometry:
Indeed. Sometimes, a simile is about as useful as a chocolate teapot.

Well glad you liked it. I did struggle with it for a bit.
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:iconpseudometry:
Haha. You're much too kind :)
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