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Stone Warrior

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I stood in the square
when they brass-marched for Tibet
I struck a pose
when the storm tore down signs and
shattered glass overhangs
I did not move
when the homeless shrieked,
mouths full of coal-candy stubs
I remained
when the Burger King caught fire,
spilt Fanta and yellow french-fry vomit
breaking the pied monotony of floortiles.

Lady
with your wind-
inverted umbrella—let's not
compete over whose heart will be hardest.
Girl
with your fresh
eyes and innocent tongue—do not
mock my stones!
My feet
are carved in place,
but still I’d stir at once to
pierce all your leeching foes,
leave them hollow shells without menace,
I'd give both my brittle arms in a flurry for you
though it'd leave me half a man and exposed:
It could only be my final move.

Or so I would claim it;
stretched between reality and desire
the world I built has ruptured a bit,
and maybe I was a little like a
Ronin unable to face his own sword,
and maybe I was a little like a
Rodent preferring to sneak sly-bites,
or maybe I just guessed at
what you’ve meant all along.

I stood in the square
when the mimes all painted their frowns on and
mimed their woes all over town;
I'd like to think I am not one of them
but I know I am.
I read something once about how there was a world of difference between a warrior and a soldier; I can't remember what it was exactly or where I read it though.

Updated to remove capitals from the beginning of most lines.
Improvement? All thoughts/opinions welcome.
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RailZombie's avatar
I haven't checked the other comments to see if you picked up suggestions to modify this... but I really have nothing to say about it, other than I wish I could write something like it. Or use metaphors the way you do, because it looks perfect the way it looks, the way it flows, the imagery is just fun; the way you pointed out the same fact a few times, without sounding repetitive or redundant. I hope I'll have some time to check more of your stuff... right now I'm fucking tired and I have to wake up for work in about 3 hours so...