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I stood in the square
when they brass-marched for Tibet
I struck a pose
when the storm tore down signs and
shattered glass overhangs
I did not move
when the homeless shrieked,
mouths full of coal-candy stubs
I remained
when the Burger King caught fire,
spilt Fanta and yellow french-fry vomit
breaking the pied monotony of floortiles.

Lady
with your wind-
inverted umbrella—let's not
compete over whose heart will be hardest.
Girl
with your fresh
eyes and innocent tongue—do not
mock my stones!
My feet
are carved in place,
but still I’d stir at once to
pierce all your leeching foes,
leave them hollow shells without menace,
I'd give both my brittle arms in a flurry for you
though it'd leave me half a man and exposed:
It could only be my final move.

Or so I would claim it;
stretched between reality and desire
the world I built has ruptured a bit,
and maybe I was a little like a
Ronin unable to face his own sword,
and maybe I was a little like a
Rodent preferring to sneak sly-bites,
or maybe I just guessed at
what you’ve meant all along.

I stood in the square
when the mimes all painted their frowns on and
mimed their woes all over town;
I'd like to think I am not one of them
but I know I am.
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I read something once about how there was a world of difference between a warrior and a soldier; I can't remember what it was exactly or where I read it though.

Updated to remove capitals from the beginning of most lines.
Improvement? All thoughts/opinions welcome.
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very nice

I particularly like the
lines that start with
"I stood in the square"

xo!

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I am a poetry admin for *DailyLitDeviations.

interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
:bulletred: currently on collab hiatus
Thank you. It was a bit of a rambler, but fun nonetheless.

--
'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
Well, fun to assemble anyway; the stimulus was less so.

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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
Lady
With your wind-
Inverted umbrella—let's not
Compete over whose heart will be hardest.
Girl
With your fresh
Eyes and innocent tongue—do not
Mock my stones!

WOW
Thanks Katie :)

--
'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it. :D
That part felt like something quite different to me, a break from my usual style (if that makes sense).

It's nice to experiment and innovate a bit.

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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
There are many very cool word choices in this!!
:+fav:

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~ Amor fati / Love your fate. :frail:
Thank you. Any in particular that really work for you? (for my future edification and improvement)

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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
"pied monotony of floortiles"
"Pierce all your leeching foes,
Leave them hollow shells without menace,
I'd give both my brittle arms in a flurry . . ."
"Mimed their woes all over town"

I also like the voice I hear that is trying to convince himself of something . .


and I love your signature- Dostoevsky is one of my faves :heart:

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~ Amor fati / Love your fate. :frail:

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