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Sunrise Letdown

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Daedalus, cradling
your son's ironic wings—weep
wax-hand, gallant thief.
After a little research I changed tar-hand to wax-hand--in the interests of preserving historical accuracy and so on.
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ThePenVsTheSword's avatar
It's a pretty good haiku. I'm not sure if the change bettered it or not. Sounds good either way to me.