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I saw the light and
It illumed things I’d rather
not have seen so bright
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Time to pretend.

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:iconone-dryad:
Hmmm...I keep pondering this one, and you know, in a way the last line conjures up shadows beneath trees or candles...something where the light is diminished a bit in intensity, but still very much there and balanced. Another strong, beautiful poem. Bravo! :aww:

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:earth: :tea: Beauty, always :sun: :heart:
:iconblueskye27:
Time to pretend...are you all right, Jamie?
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Yeah, I'm alright (mostly). Thanks for asking :)

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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
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Glad you identify... or maybe not, for your sake.

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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
:iconpseudometry:
How interesting, I like that image.
Thank you!

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'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
:iconone-dryad:
Always.

Lingering over your poetry is giving me great joy. Thank you, in turn. :heart:

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:earth: :tea: Beauty, always :sun: :heart:
:iconblueskye27:
Glad you're okay. :hug:
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Do I want to know?
This brings me back to the same mode of thought as your haikut, as you put it...do I want to know?

I was at martial arts class one night, and I asked one man what had happened to his toe, as it was bandaged, and he told me "the nail broke and it's infected. You want to see?" I started thinking Do I? Do I want to see? when he burst out laughing "You are a sick person! You are the only person who had to think about it! I like that!"

Maybe I do want to see everything, if only just for the sake of some sick voyeurism.

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The sleep of reason produces monsters - Fransisco Goya

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